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The Curse of The Bike – 2022

The Curse of the Bike

-I don’t know how I came up with it but it was good!

(Comment if you have any thoughts on this story!)

 

I’ve always loved riding bikes, scooters, and skateboards. But my all time favourite are bikes. I have had about 4 bikes throughout my life, not much, but each of those bikes were special.

It was my 4th birthday. Warm evening sunset really set a chill mood that day. Everyone gathered around in the sitting room. With an angry bird cake on the coffee table. The one present I remember was this one as big as me! Once I blew out the candles. I instantly rushed to the present. Everyone laughed thinking of me as just being excited, but no, I felt like this bike was truly powerful!

I opened up the wrapping with a ruckus. Once it was fully exposed I felt this shock wave of some sort, it was quite a weird sensation. My head jolted back along with my whole body. I endeavoured to fight against the force. But nothing worked, it was as if I was paralysed. I could see myself moving at a slow pace backwards if I was doing a back flip in slow mo. I finally cocked my head back to view my gift. I could see myself. A duplicate. I also realised that I was floating. It was an odd thought that I was truly flying. A deep voice of an old man suddenly spooked me.
“The power of this bike is unpredictable. Take care of yourself along with this bike. This is my message to the chosen one.”

I looked behind me but no-one was talking. Mum, Dad, grandparents, they were all frozen in place. A descending warp lasted a second then….

I was back, standing there, staring at the bike.

I remember that day for the rest of my life! It was so weird. Now, I have my 4th bike. Ever since that weird event, odd scenarios seemed to happen to each of the bikes except for the bike I have now, until I found this anonymous button hidden at the bottom of my suspensions. I got curious so I pressed it…

Nothing happened. This sudden suspense was built. I couldn’t see or hear it, but I could feel it. I knew it was coming…

Suddenly a bassed boom blasted me away from my bike! A man in all black appears beside the bike, and in a deep robotic voice the man says “This space transporting vehicle will be taken in custody of the government of alien bravo122 world.” “Wait!” I shout. “Packaging 324 will be arriving shortly. Due to a call by Alien 389 64 hours and 52 seconds ago.” What was this dude talking about? Where did he come from? Why did he come? So many questions filled my head. “Alien courier service delivery33 completed.” And just in a blink of an eye he was gone as well as my bike. I need to get my bike back! I tell myself.

When a sudden voice says “Jin ”. I twitched. “Dad, stop scaring me like that!” “Sorry. Um there is a package that came in with a new scooter. Would you like to give it a try?” Wait for a package, my dad just said there was a package that came in, just as the alien told me. The alien also mentioned that it was also called in by aliens. Alien389 to be exact!

Is my dad getting these bikes for me on purpose?

Is my dad an alien?

Are these bikes sent by him?

 

And most importantly what was happening to me?

Shreks’ First Ever Blog post….

Shrek does a blog post!

Here is a little About Me that Shrek made.
I wonder what he wrote?

( Comment down below if you have any questions :D)

 

G’day there,
You may know me as the handsome one and only, Shrek. I live peacefully in a small swamp which conveniently has my everyday needs!
If you have seen my movie, you may also know that I’m an in shape, handsome, tall, kind, loving ogre. I may be stereotyped as a scary disgusting creature but no. I am basically perfect.
I appreciate time alone and sometimes enjoy the company of my fish, bugs, and toothpaste in the kitchen and bathroom. My favourite colour is brown and I love my home dished fish eye balls!
Most of the time I enjoy keeping myself occupied either catching my food or having warm mud baths that are kept warm in the evening by the setting sun!

The Magic Die – 2022

This is my random writing task. We were assigned to choose a random photo and write a random story about the photo. I thought this task was fun because it requires an imagination!

Please leave a comment if you have anything on your mind about this task!

The day was basically perfect. The sun was setting, the warmth of the birds singing in the trees hugged me like a blanket. A sudden drone of a deep water droplet entered the sky as if it were played on a massive speaker. My dog, a small black chihuahua, glanced into the sky. Together we looked up as a huge wave in the sky seemed to ripple across the atmosphere. In the middle of the ripple was a tiny white square with black dots smothering it. It seemed to get bigger and bigger when I finally recognised it as a human sized dice!

 

Shock rushed through my body like water being poured into a cup. I wondered, why is there a dice in the sky? Why is this happening? What is happening? I stopped in my thoughts realising that “I have to get out of here!”. I dashed behind me, near a rock wall. I looked back and my heart dropped. I saw that I had left my dog behind!

 

He was still looking up at the die, confused as always. I couldn’t leave her there, so I went back to get her. The die was getting closer. Its distance was subtracting each second between us! I had to act fast. I grabbed my hopeless dog with the leash being dragged behind. Bang!

 

I could feel the sand on my neck. I could feel the sand in my hands. I opened my eyes and could see nothing. I could see darkness. Where am I? My dog was missing and I was, well, somewhere. I got up carefully until I could know I was truly standing. I turn around expecting to find anything, a light, a person, my dog! But there was nothing, not one simple piece of difference in the darkness. I take a deep breath and start to walk forward. One step down, two steps down. I felt like this next step I would fall off a cliff. But I took a bold breath and went.

 

The silence was filled with the chirping of the birds in the trees and the darkness was filled with the sunset and beach! I was back at the beach, but where was my dog. I turned behind me and I saw the dice I was right behind me! “Did I just walk out of that, that cube!” I say aloud. I slowly touch the cube and shockingly my arm goes through it. Like it’s a hologram.

 

Something furry touches my leg so I look down and I see my lovely dog! She was still alive. I picked her up and hugged her with all my life. Suddenly a man’s voice echoed through the beach. “Player one. Move 6 steps.” The voice announces. I look at the die thinking it’s coming from it. But no, the voice seemed to come from the sky!

Just as the voice finished the sentence I suddenly forced forward 7 robotic steps. I wasn’t controlling myself, it was something else. It was only three steps in when I noticed the die had rolled a six. I was confused. Was I being controlled by the die? Or was it the voice in the sky? I wondered why there were so many weird things going on at the same time. That’s when it clicked. Am I in a game?

Willow Park Fun Day – 2022

This is my writing task about the Willow Park fun day yesterday. Yesterday we went to Willow Park a camp that includes multiple activities!
It was really fun and I hope we get to do more fun days!

Please leave a comment if you have anything on your mind about this post!

 

About a day ago Team5 had a trip to Willow Park. A camp with multiple fun activities for children along with their parents to play. There is also a small beach open for everyone to go and swim, bath or even play some sand-capable sports!

The team came here for a fun day. I’m guessing because it’s almost the end of the term. There we had courts we played in, inside games, mini golf and tramps set up outside. Oh and also a vast field capable of rugby. We basically did everything except mini golf. After the morning tea we got ready to go to the beach neighbouring us! At the beach we did some bombs off of this paddle board since there were no structures to jump off of. Once we came back we had lunch, more free time outside and got ready to go home.

The day was overall fantastic, but I would say the food would have been the best for me!

Next time we get to go there I think we should be able to stay for at least a week. I’m pretty sure that we would all fit in the cabins, well I hope. If not then some of us would have to sleep outside in tents only if the owner lets us. Talking about the owner, Chris, he is the one who set up all of this for us. So I would like to say a big thank you and hope that his business goes on!

For our next fun day I and probably multiple others would like to go to have a full on camp!

Or if not then a day at school with fun things to do like sport, movies, fun activities, hide and seek and night! 

Responsibility Acrostic Poem – 2022

Respect
Eyes
Seek help
People
Owner
Never give up
Safe school
Ignore mean people
Best you can be
Idol to the young
Lovely people will be lovely
International people
Talk properly
Yell not, but whisper

 

 

 

 

Hello once again people!

For this task we were to make an acrostic poem based on Responsibility!
It was a small, easy task but I thought it was pretty cool.
That’s really all I have to say about this task so…

Please leave a comment if you have anything on your mind about this task!

Thanks, Jin.

Jason Voorhees – Writing Task – 2022

Jason Voorhees, one of the most known killers on the web.

 

Jason Voorhees was first presented in a 1980 film, Friday the 13th. This film is said to be one the most popular media franchises in America! 

This movie follows up on a group of counsellors at summer camp in Camp Crystal Lake. They are killed off one by one by none other than the one and only Jason Voorhees (played by Ari Lehman).
The Jason Voorhees series have gone on for years with the age of 42 years.

 

For this writing task our literacy class had to write a short paragraph on one of three famous people.
These people were: Jason, Julius Caesar, and this basket ball lady I have no idea who is. I chose Jason
because he was the most known person out of the three and because I think Jason is a cool character
in the horror community!

Please comment if you’ve got anything on your mind about this task!

Thanks, Jin.

MonkeyType – Day1

Wassup bloggers!

As some of you know this blog mostly has school work but for this post
I wanted to show you this of this specific picture of my score on MonkeyType!

MonkeyType is a website about typing. As you can see my wpm/words per minute is 71.98!
That’s my high score but I hope to get higher.

Feel free to comment what is your high score if you’ve played this!
I’ll probably try and beat it!
I’ll also get others in my class to play this to see their high scores!

 

Please leave me a comment if you’ve anything on your mind about this post!

Thanks, Jin.

My Mihi – 2022

Hello once again bloggers!
This is my Mihi preformed off by heart. My task was to learn my Mihi, say my Mihi infront of the class,
then record myself saying the Mihi and post it on my blog.

Don’t know what a Mihi is? A Mihi is a small speech telling everyone who you are.
Mihis come in mutiple different languages but in this case mine was in Maori. I may not be Maori but
I am originally born and raised in NZ making me a Kiwi.

Please leave me a comment if you’ve got anything on your mind about this post!

Thanks, Jin

Show not Tell – Writing task – 2022

Hello once again bloggers!

For this writing task we had to show and not tell our writing.

So basically write a simple sentence: I like ice cream. Then put it into a more descriptive and different piece of writing explaining you like ice cream with out literally  telling that you like ice cream.

Please leave a comment if you’ve got anything on your mind about this post!

Thanks, Jin

Mr Moran ‘s Break – Writing challenge Level 4

This writing is probably the most uncoordinated writing I’ve ever wrote.
Besides that, this story was pretty good. This here is my writing task for today. Have a read through and see if you can find anything you could change. If so then please write it in the comments!

A loud knock fills the silence in the room. “Um, excuse me Russell.” Russell turns his swivel chair to see who’s there. “May I take the day off today, (cough)” Um, I have to clean my um, window with uh, Ajax that window cleaner.” I’m pretty sure that it’s not for windows.” Russell replys. “You know that you can just ask to go -like a normal person, you don’t have to lie.” Russell responds. “Shots.” Mr Moran leaves in a rush, almost falling over the door stopper. “Good old Mr Moran.” Russell mumbles under his breath.

Mr Moran dashes through the parking lot in a hurry, before starting up his car and driving off. As he speeds through the Point England gates he brushes his hair back looking in the rear view mirror. Minutes go by and nervousness travels through his body. A bead of sweat slides down his face leaving a wet trail behind.

What felt like a 2 hour drive, Mr Moran had finally made it to his stop. It was the latest, coolest, most popular diner in town. McDonalds supreme! It was a 10 story building with multiple windows covering it. It was basically a glass building! Mr Moran hops out of the car and rushes in the building. Huge men in black suits stood by the door pushing Mr Moran away. The body guards went from strong scary people to very scared weak people as they realised the badge Mr Moran had. It read:

The Maccas King

Mr Moran was secretly the Maccas king! Mr Moran pushed through the guards and through the doors and to those that were just beside the receptionist. Little before you knew he was already at the top of the building. The view was phenomenal! Mr Moran rushed to table 79 and took a seat next to the curved window side. “Mr Moran!” yells the chief “Here is your big mac deluxe!” A big mac the size of his head sits on the table top for Mr Moran to demolish.